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A GUY OPENED1Missing pov A CHEAP ALIEXPRESS MP3 PLAYER, SHOWED THE CHIP TO CODEX, AND IT REWROTE THE DEVICE’S OS TO FIX THE BLUETOOTH AND CONTROLS2Format leak
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We’ve officially entered the era of zero-shot hardware hacking. A developer opened1Hook written up a cheap AliExpress MP3 player, showed the chip layout to OpenAI's Codex, and watched it rewrite the device's entire OS to fix the broken Bluetooth and controls.2Format improved
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We’ve officially entered the era of zero-shot hardware hacking. A developer opened1Hook written up a cheap AliExpress MP3 player, showed the chip layout to OpenAI's Codex, and watched it rewrite the device's entire OS to fix the broken Bluetooth and controls.2Format improved
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